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The power of language

September 1st 2010 03:54
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Words, like numbers, can be twisted to suit the aims of the user.

There was an interesting news item today about a British doctor who has developed an iPhone application which can act as a stethoscope. Dr Peter Bentley’s idea was meant to be a toy, but the app works so well that it has been downloaded by more than three million doctors and is starting to appear in hospitals in place of traditional stethoscopes.


It’s free, about 500 new users a day are downloading it and experts claim it has already saved lives.

``Smartphones are incredibly powerful devices packed full of sensors, cameras, high-quality microphones with amazing displays,'' Dr Bentley said. ``They are capable of saving lives, saving money and improving healthcare in a dramatic fashion, and we carry these massively powerful computers in our pockets.''

This sounds like an all-round success story, and would be if it stopped there. But Dr Bentley has a problem. He claims he could produce more apps, including a mobile ultrasound scanner or an app to measure oxygen levels in the blood, but is being blocked by “out-of-date” industry regulations.

It is easy to see this as a call to review the rules which govern such things. However, the British Medicines and Healthcare Products Regulatory Agency, the body in charge of new technology regulation, chose to see it as a challenge.


“This is such a complex area that we are currently looking at every application on a case-by-case basis,” an agency spokesman said. “'We want to ensure that these new technologies are effectively regulated, thereby protecting health and avoiding unnecessary deterrents, while at the same time removing any unnecessary obstacles to manufacturers who wish to exploit new technologies for the benefit of patients.”

Huh? In the face of implied, or perceived, criticism, this is the obfuscation defence which has been perfected by politicians. It’s an unnecessary deterrent in its own right.

The Healthcare Products Regulatory Agency would help both developers and users of new technology a great deal better if it used simpler language to present a clearer message.

A little more care about language could have produced something like: “The agency’s job is to find a balance between fostering the development of technology and ensuring the public is protected from unscrupulous or incompetent efforts. Regulations, like technology itself, are always developing, and breakthroughs like that of Dr Bentley are the guides we, as regulators, use to keep being effective. We congratulate Dr Bentley on the stethoscope app, and will contact him immediately to discuss the obstacles he sees to further smart phone applications.”

Clear, simple and positive, and much more likely to lead to productive dialogue than the pretentious jargon above.

At any level of communication, language can be used to build obstacles or clear the way for progress.


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Basic rules for writing a novel: 1

April 11th 2010 00:36
bloggercises pen

Anyone can write a novel, and many dream of doing so for reasons other than profit and critical acclaim. For many it is like running a marathon — something to be done for the satisfaction; because it is there.

To write a great novel takes a synthesis of genes and neurones probably determined by distant forebears. It helps if you are a direct descendent of Scheherazade.

A competent novel, however, can be written with no more than a knowledge of grammar and an understanding of some basic rules of writing. This is the first of a series of posts looking at those basic writing rules.

_____________________________ __________________________

There are two rules of novel writing which are apparently contradictory. The first, which we shall discuss in a later post, is the importance of not using the same word repetitively. The second is the importance of always using the verb "said" after speech.

As Elmore Leonard said in his 10 Rules for Writing Fiction, "Never use a verb other than 'said' to carry dialogue. Dialogue belongs to the character; the verb is the writer sticking his nose in."

Consider the following: "I ache everywhere. Even my eyeballs ache," he said. Compare it to this: "I ache everywhere. Even my eyeballs ache," he grumbled.

Substituting "grumbled" for "said" is over-writing. It is telling the reader what he or she already knows. Leonard points out "gasped", "cautioned" and "lied" as equally intrusive.

Anything within quotation marks in a novel should be thought of as dialogue — a conversation between the character and the reader. When the story is compelling, there is a bond, a spell, between your characters and your reader. Using "said" at the end of dialogue takes the reader gently to the next paragraph. Using any other verb is likely to break the spell.


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Dark corners of the language: clichés

February 1st 2010 05:17
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We have in the past advised novice writers against using clichés. There no known excuse to use a cliché, we said. There is no imaginable circumstance in the occupied universe, we advised, that can justify using a cliché.

Well, we got that wrong.

John Croucher has just published a book full of clichés, and every one of them is justified.

Croucher is a professor at Australia’s Macquarie Graduate School of Management, and his book is more about the business world than grammar. The book’s dedication is to ``all those suckers who believe everything people tell them''.

However, Bloggercises got attentive on behalf of writers and anyone interested in language when Croucher asserted that clichés often exist today because they are used as a way to disguise meaning. To put it plainly, Croucher says clichés often mean the opposite of what they look like they mean.

Sound crazy? We thought so too. So here are some examples, and after reading them it is apparent that Croucher has cleverly identified something here.

Cliché: Are you making a fashion statement?
Real meaning: You look ridiculous.

Cliché: Our company is containing costs.
Real meaning: Our company is maximising management salaries and bonuses and minimising the wages of everyone else.

Cliché: You deserve better than me.
Real meaning: I want better than you.

Cliché: Our company is seeking a self-starter.
Real meaning: In this role, nobody is going to help you whatsoever.

Cliché: This is a challenging role.
Real meaning: Everyone is going to hate you.

Cliché: This property is a golden opportunity.
Real meaning: This property is a golden opportunity for the agent to make a commission.

Croucher says the reverse cliché phenomenon is a result of a competitive world. They are, he says, “a form of modern punishment”.

``I watch a lot of TV and read a lot of papers and, being in management school, I get a lot of management speak paradigm shifts and synergies: tools for punishing people,'' he said.

``But because this is a dog-eat-dog world, because we need to get that competitive edge, we lie more. A lot of people look good on paper, because people tell us what we want to hear. People lie all the time, and others believe them because they want to.”

In other words, clichés are corporate or self-promoting double-speak, and most of us fall for it.

Caveat emptor.


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English. RIP

March 20th 2009 17:31
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Vincent van Gogh, Sorrow (1882)

The language as we know it is doomed. The pressures of change have grown until they are irresistible. Twitter may be the straw which breaks the back of English. Perhaps it is it too late. Language as we knew it


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