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The power of language

September 1st 2010 03:54
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Words, like numbers, can be twisted to suit the aims of the user.

There was an interesting news item today about a British doctor who has developed an iPhone application which can act as a stethoscope. Dr Peter Bentley’s idea was meant to be a toy, but the app works so well that it has been downloaded by more than three million doctors and is starting to appear in hospitals in place of traditional stethoscopes.


It’s free, about 500 new users a day are downloading it and experts claim it has already saved lives.

``Smartphones are incredibly powerful devices packed full of sensors, cameras, high-quality microphones with amazing displays,'' Dr Bentley said. ``They are capable of saving lives, saving money and improving healthcare in a dramatic fashion, and we carry these massively powerful computers in our pockets.''

This sounds like an all-round success story, and would be if it stopped there. But Dr Bentley has a problem. He claims he could produce more apps, including a mobile ultrasound scanner or an app to measure oxygen levels in the blood, but is being blocked by “out-of-date” industry regulations.

It is easy to see this as a call to review the rules which govern such things. However, the British Medicines and Healthcare Products Regulatory Agency, the body in charge of new technology regulation, chose to see it as a challenge.


“This is such a complex area that we are currently looking at every application on a case-by-case basis,” an agency spokesman said. “'We want to ensure that these new technologies are effectively regulated, thereby protecting health and avoiding unnecessary deterrents, while at the same time removing any unnecessary obstacles to manufacturers who wish to exploit new technologies for the benefit of patients.”

Huh? In the face of implied, or perceived, criticism, this is the obfuscation defence which has been perfected by politicians. It’s an unnecessary deterrent in its own right.

The Healthcare Products Regulatory Agency would help both developers and users of new technology a great deal better if it used simpler language to present a clearer message.

A little more care about language could have produced something like: “The agency’s job is to find a balance between fostering the development of technology and ensuring the public is protected from unscrupulous or incompetent efforts. Regulations, like technology itself, are always developing, and breakthroughs like that of Dr Bentley are the guides we, as regulators, use to keep being effective. We congratulate Dr Bentley on the stethoscope app, and will contact him immediately to discuss the obstacles he sees to further smart phone applications.”

Clear, simple and positive, and much more likely to lead to productive dialogue than the pretentious jargon above.

At any level of communication, language can be used to build obstacles or clear the way for progress.


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The inaccurate astrologer

June 23rd 2010 09:46
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My astrologer’s advice to me the other day was not to over-complicate things.

My advice to my astrologer is not to over-write things.

Consider the following sentences. 1. With a full moon winking alluringly at Ursa Major this week, it is best not to over-complicate things. 2. With a full moon winking alluringly at Ursa Major this week, it is best not to complicate things.

Grammatical considerations aside, there is no difference in meaning.

The definition of complicate is “to make complex”. There is no such word as over-complicate. If there were, things would get over-messy.


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eat pray love
Caroline Overington is one of the brighter lights of Australian newspaper journalism. She contributes to radio and television, writes a blog and has published three books, including a novel.

In her column yesterday in The Australian, Overington was witty and compelling with a satirical look at the publishing phenomenon Eat Pray Love, and the book's author, Elizabeth Gilbert.

Satire is a versatile tool. It can be gentle, humorous or self-deprecating. And it can be harsh. Overington's column yesterday was of the latter intent.

Eat Pray Love, as Overington also notes, has sold 11 million copies worldwide. It has moved and motivated many people, it has inspired some, and it is being made into a film starring Julia Roberts.

That, however, is not the way Overington sees it. The book's success, she suggests, is because it is so "nauseating" that the women — only women, she claims — who read it proclaim it so thoroughly nauseating that they thereby encourage all their friends to go out and buy it too.

Why they wouldn't just borrow it from their queasy friend and endure just one or two pages of nausea is not made clear.

Overington sneers at Gilbert's marriage break-down, glosses over a food discovery journey to Italy, sneers at her spiritual discovery journey to India, and sneers again at Gilbert finding love in Indonesia.

It is much easier for reviewers to disparage than to compliment. Satire, irony and sarcasm don't lend themselves to praise. It's so easy to sound smart when sneering, especially with the skill that Overington brings to the task.

It breaks down, however, if the criticism lacks factual support, logic or truth. Or, in this case, all three.

Let's start by correcting two errors of fact: I loved the book, and I'm a bloke.

I enjoyed the book on two levels. Firstly, it talks informatively about three aspects of life on which we all spend time and energy. Good food is one of the world's most popular subjects, and Gilbert's journey back to the Italy of her forebears is a joyous romp. Spirituality comes more naturally, or more urgently, to some than others, but few of us have not wondered at times what answers it might hold for us. And love, especially when it is starting, is one of the more potent forces in the known universe.

The second level on which I enjoyed Eat Pray Love is the quality of the writing. Like Jon Krakauer writing about mountains, like Simon Singh writing about mathematics, and like Cecil Purdy writing about chess, Gilbert's lessons in life are clear, insightful, witty and charming. The writing flows like chocolate topping. And on more pages than not, she will deliver a phrase or image crafted in words of pure gold. As with one of Kathy Lette's peerless puns, I often wanted to stand and applaud.

Caroline Overington saw none of that. She did not, or could not, identify with the struggles of a young woman to come to terms with love gone awry, with the exuberant discovery of Italian ebullience, with profound questions about things we can't see, and about the pain and joy of new love.

Most of all, for me, Overington's column was embarrassing because of the fact that Gilbert is in Australia at the moment as the "top draw", to use Overington's words, at the Sydney Writers' Festival. Gilbert deserves much better than this poor welcome to Australia. Hopefully she will see the Overington column for what is was, a cheap shot which should have carried the heading Bitch Spleen Spite.

elizabeth gilbert
Elizabeth Gilbert

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Basic rules for writing a novel: 1

April 11th 2010 00:36
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Anyone can write a novel, and many dream of doing so for reasons other than profit and critical acclaim. For many it is like running a marathon — something to be done for the satisfaction; because it is there.

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A tip for blogging newcomers

March 20th 2010 06:17
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As Orble races toward the 10,000 member blog landmark, we are seeing some interesting new blogs. It's an exciting thing to create a blog, especially if it's your first blog. Your first reader, your first vote, your first comment and your first interaction — it's a brave new world.

There are many tips for new bloggers, and they have been listed and discussed in various posts in this blog among many others. A lot of those tips are common sense: choose a topic and stick to it; write clearly and well; use a spell checker; do some research on key words and search engine visibility etc


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Twilight's vampires aren't real-life

February 11th 2010 05:39
stephenie meyer
Stephenie Meyer

Emmet Spain, a 29-year-old Australian who has just successfully negotiated the obstacle course which leads to the publication of a first novel, may have ended, once and for all, the raging debate about the legitimacy of Twilight.

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Dark corners of the language: clichés

February 1st 2010 05:17
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We have in the past advised novice writers against using clichés. There no known excuse to use a cliché, we said. There is no imaginable circumstance in the occupied universe, we advised, that can justify using a cliché.

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The power of a writer

January 31st 2010 02:49
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My novel, which is developing at the pace of a geriatric glacier on Jupiter, nevertheless provides moments of great satisfaction.

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English is simple, right? Where French and Italian makes things difficult with two forms of the definite article, masculine and feminine, and German makes things even tougher by throwing in neuter, English uses just one word. The. Isn't that easy?

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A writer's tool kit: redundancies

September 22nd 2009 23:56
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Some follow-up thoughts reinforcing yesterday's post on the issue of overused words, which is a subset of the broader subject of redundancies.

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A writer's tool kit: overused words

September 22nd 2009 00:27
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Consider the following two paragraphs:

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Write and wrong

September 3rd 2009 04:07
vitreous humour

The aim of the first paragraph of any text, be it a blog post or a doctoral thesis, is to tempt the reader to venture forward to the second paragraph. Etcetera.

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Here are some simple rules for new bloggers.

Don't start unless you mean to go on. Blogging is a brave new publishing world but the internet is littered with abandoned blogs. It's a lot of fun until the novelty wears off and then it becomes serious work. Blogs are hungry pets; good blogs are voracious creatures. A blog is a long-term commitment


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the history of writing

A few weeks ago I wrote a post here entitled "Will blogging rule the world?" It evoked a lot of discussion, and I have found myself thinking about the question ever since. This opinion piece is the result, looking at changes that the digital age and, in particular, blogging, may bring to many things that we now take for granted. It is the first of a two-part series, with the second instalment to cover media, publishing and opinion leadership.

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